Ronald Knox's "Detective Story Decalogue", a reinterpretation
by Adrian Nebbett -- WelcomeHolmes member in Malaysia


One of my favourite finds of the summer was a copy of Howard Haycraft's
THE ART OF THE MYSTERY STORY, a wonderful collection of essays including Rex Stout's "Watson Was A Woman", Dorothy L Sayers' introduction to THE OMNIBUS OF CRIME, Starrett's original "Private Life..." essay and much, much more.

It also has Ronald Knox's "Detective Story Decalogue" - his collection of rules for the writing of detective stories, which are as follows:

1. The criminal must be someone mentioned in the early part of the story, but must not be anyone whose thoughts the reader has been allowed to follow.

2. All supernatural or preternatural agencies are ruled out as a matter of course.

3. Not more than one secret room or passage is allowable.

4. No hitherto undiscovered poisons may be used, nor any appliance which
will need a long scientific explanation at the end.

5. No Chinaman must figure in the story.

6. No accident must ever help the detective, nor must he ever have an unaccountable intuition which proves right.

7. The detective must not himself commit the crime.

8. The detective must not light on any clues which are not instantly produced
for the inspection of the reader.

9. The stupid friend of the detective, the Watson, must not conceal any thoughts which pass through his mind; his intelligence must be slightly,
but very slightly, below that of the average reader.

10. Twin brothers, and doubles generally, must not appear unless we have been duly prepared for them.


At the start of the 21st Century with the output of Sherlockiana at an all-time high what rules would you like to see in the "Sherlockian Pastiche Decalogue"?

My first offer, in light of this month's story [Sept/ABBE] and a recent Breese effort I was unfortunate enough to read, is....

1. Any character who claims to have been assaulted by fictitious assailants should at least go to the effort of leaving footprints and other indications that there actually was someone else in the room/garden/forest at the time of the assault.

2. The child/young man/woman who tells everyone at every conceivable opportunity that his/her parents died while he was still a baby will not discover that his father/mother is actually alive and lord of the manor.

3. No one will dress up as a headless monk/cavalier/woman in white to scare people away from whatever it is they're up to, particularly if the place in question is one which no one would ever have had any intention of going to anyway if it had not been for reports of a headless monk/cavalier/woman in white there.

4. Moriarty did not survive Reichenbach, nor is he a figment of Holmes's imagination.

5. Newspaper reports of Irene Adler's death will not be followed by her astonishing reappearance at an embassy ball/theatrical premiere.

6. If a feisty young Victorian girl who prefers men's clothing must appear as a major character she should at least have the decency not to have a much-loved drippy companion who cannot understand why she objects so much to petticoats, corsets and needlepoint. Neither will she be related to the Holmes family in any way whatsoever.

7. No child shall assist Holmes in the solving of a crime.

8. Mrs Hudson will not scold Holmes for not finishing his lunch, nor will she have an accent that would embarrass even Dick Van Dyke (see MARY POPPINS). Her use of the words "nice cup of tea" will be limited to once per book.

9. Should, on any occasion, Holmes and Watson see a gopher, mockingbird, bluebird or jackrabbit, particularly if this occurs on Dartmoor, they will be suitably surprised and comment on the fact they as far as they were aware these species did not exist in the United Kingdom.

10. Sherlock Holmes will not own a talking dog or cat, particularly if this animal has a cockney accent.


Any other offers?

Addendum to rule 3:
The eccentric/unsavoury looking stranger waiting in the Baker Street rooms when Watson gets home will not be Holmes in disguise, neither will Watson be attempting to tug off said stranger's beard just as Holmes enters the room behind him.

Addendum to rules 4 & 5:
Anyone who has died by drowning and whose body has never been recovered will have the good grace to remain drowned and unrecovered and will not turn up alive and well in the final chapter.


Adrian Nebbett | email

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